From 44f696e170cf4a6f6c6af4382b0c1934aea55828 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Philippe Pittoli Date: Thu, 7 Nov 2024 15:52:41 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Rephrase a few things. --- src/App/Page/DomainList.purs | 3 ++- src/App/Page/Home.purs | 13 +++++-------- 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/App/Page/DomainList.purs b/src/App/Page/DomainList.purs index a0b4998..501596f 100644 --- a/src/App/Page/DomainList.purs +++ b/src/App/Page/DomainList.purs @@ -241,7 +241,8 @@ render { accepted_domains, my_domains, newDomainForm, askDomainTransferForm, del [ Bulma.h3 "Share the ownership of a domain" , Bulma.simple_quote """ Ask for a "share token" for your domain and give it to other users. - All the owners be able to make modifications to the domain. + All the owners can make modifications to the domain. + Don't let the administration of a domain be the burden of a single person! """ ] diff --git a/src/App/Page/Home.purs b/src/App/Page/Home.purs index cc44d2a..7806b63 100644 --- a/src/App/Page/Home.purs +++ b/src/App/Page/Home.purs @@ -110,21 +110,18 @@ render _ = HH.div_ , p "The project is fully open-source (ISC licence)." , HH.text "There are a few parts:" , HH.ul_ - [ link "https://git.baguette.netlib.re/Baguette/authd" "authd" + [ link "https://git.baguette.netlib.re/Baguette/authd" "authentication daemon" """ - the authentication (and authorization) daemon, used to authenticate - clients through different services; + to authenticate clients through different services; """ - , link "https://git.baguette.netlib.re/Baguette/dnsmanager" "dnsmanagerd" + , link "https://git.baguette.netlib.re/Baguette/dnsmanager" "dnsmanager daemon" """ - the dns manager daemon, used as an interactive database, enabling clients - to ask for domains, then handle the domain zones; + an interactive database enabling clients to ask for domains then to manage DNS zones; """ , link "https://git.baguette.netlib.re/Baguette/dnsmanager-webclient" "dnsmanager webclient" """ - the web client that you are currently using, reading this very text, - and enjoying while managing your zones. 🥰 + this user-friendly website, so you can manage your zones. 🥰 """ ] , Bulma.hr